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A suggestion
Hello
Thanks for the translation! It really great!!
I got a little suggestion.
I feel that in the translation, Weed seem a bit too "nice".
From the summary and the discussion, Weed should be a bit more evil or rather selfish. I meant it in a good way. He would not harm other intentionally but when there is a share of loot or reward, he will try to get the bigger pie. <-- this is the comedy part of the Novel which I really love.
I also like parts where the novel describe other people's reaction when they are shocked to see Weed's power or extraordinary things that Weed does. <-- stuff like "jaw dropping"
I also like to read what he thinks in his mind, the monologue is very funny, especially when it come to money.
I think it is ok to get creative with the translation.
Well, this is my thought anyway. Ignore what I say if I don't make sense lol
AND THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE TRANSLATION!!!!!
Thanks for the translation! It really great!!
I got a little suggestion.
I feel that in the translation, Weed seem a bit too "nice".
From the summary and the discussion, Weed should be a bit more evil or rather selfish. I meant it in a good way. He would not harm other intentionally but when there is a share of loot or reward, he will try to get the bigger pie. <-- this is the comedy part of the Novel which I really love.
I also like parts where the novel describe other people's reaction when they are shocked to see Weed's power or extraordinary things that Weed does. <-- stuff like "jaw dropping"
I also like to read what he thinks in his mind, the monologue is very funny, especially when it come to money.
I think it is ok to get creative with the translation.
Well, this is my thought anyway. Ignore what I say if I don't make sense lol
AND THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE TRANSLATION!!!!!
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